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I see a face, replace... my reflection
And they, replay... the rejection
I look away, see no way... for my affection
I take a step, it's a trap... your ressurection
Again you're there, from thin air... but just a fraction
Of all the dreams, we have seen, turn to practice
You hide but I don't need to seek
I find... until I try to speak
You won't move, you won't reply,
are you only in my mind?
Keep seeing you, only through... glass and window
I feel the pain, cold and rain... and the wind blow
miss a sign, hit the line... I will still go
You hide but I don't need to seek
I find... until I try to speak
You won't move, you won't reply,
are you only in my mind?
But suddenly, I can see... you're coming nearer
I ask again, what's your plan... but I can't hear her
I'm such a fool, looking at you
In the mirror...
And they, replay... the rejection
I look away, see no way... for my affection
I take a step, it's a trap... your ressurection
Again you're there, from thin air... but just a fraction
Of all the dreams, we have seen, turn to practice
You hide but I don't need to seek
I find... until I try to speak
You won't move, you won't reply,
are you only in my mind?
Keep seeing you, only through... glass and window
I feel the pain, cold and rain... and the wind blow
miss a sign, hit the line... I will still go
You hide but I don't need to seek
I find... until I try to speak
You won't move, you won't reply,
are you only in my mind?
But suddenly, I can see... you're coming nearer
I ask again, what's your plan... but I can't hear her
I'm such a fool, looking at you
In the mirror...
This must be the most complicated songs I've ever written, not just lyrically but more musically. It's gonna be proper difficult to record it.
I like challanges
The original WIP of this is still in my scraps folder as In My Mind.
Does anyone have any suggestions for a title? I think it could use a better one.
And what do you think of the song? Please tel me your opinion
© Namenotrequired
Under Creative Commons Licence
I like challanges
The original WIP of this is still in my scraps folder as In My Mind.
Does anyone have any suggestions for a title? I think it could use a better one.
And what do you think of the song? Please tel me your opinion
© Namenotrequired
Under Creative Commons Licence
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The most beautiful song I´ve read in my entire life, I´m not even kidding, I completely connected to it. I even added some improvised music and sang it. I´m not gonna sleep tonight, you´ve just inspired a silly skinny guy.